The Narrator ( Revised )

This week we revised one script. I chose The Narrator.

Here:
The Narrator. ( Revised )

Tally Man

This week I was asked to create a Character..

Here:
Tally Man.

Space Tommy

This week I was asked to write a Film Parody..

Here:
Space Tommy.



Critique from Class:

It went over quite well.  The main suggestions was to perhaps have Tommy talking to Darth Vader, use the lack of faith, and offending of Tommy.  "What? You saying I don't believe in Space Jesus!?"

Also, they loved Space-Jersey.. wanted to bring that up sooner.