Friday, May 2, 2014

Trucker Book

Here is the first draft of the second comedy sketch I wrote for the UCB Sketch class 101.

Trucker Book.

Critique from Class: 

The feedback on this one was to have more of the childish arguments that occur on facebook.

Did you see that article about Isreal!?
I hate Isreal!
You anti-semetic!

Also to have some of those..  Which Disney Princess are you!?  Kind of quizzes.

There was also a comment suggesting to better setup the sketch by having a Trucker declare how glad he was they lived in the age of Social Media.

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