Here is the first draft of the second comedy sketch I wrote for the UCB Sketch class 101.
Critique from Class:
The feedback on this one was to have more of the childish arguments that occur on facebook.
Did you see that article about Isreal!?
I hate Isreal!
Also to have some of those.. Which Disney Princess are you!? Kind of quizzes.
There was also a comment suggesting to better setup the sketch by having a Trucker declare how glad he was they lived in the age of Social Media.